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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #1

Thanks for giving this one last look before they go to the printers. Your help has been amazing, and it is much appreciated.

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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #2

Heavy axe is missing a dot to the left of the EB
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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #3

Mythic Staff of the Viper is missing the year symbols (ankhs).
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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #4

Should Lenses of Ra say +1 damage with Missile Attacks?

I don't think Rangers have any non-missile ranged attacks, but maybe I'm forgetting something.
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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #5

I seem to recall Elf Wizard may be getting a shakeup in the character design process to be more combat focused.

If so, maybe their Crown of the Magus should benefit ranged (to also include missile attacks), or both spell and melee (like Ring of [Jealous] Fervor).
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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #6

Boots of Shai's Aid are I think considerably the best non-completion uncommon boots ever made.

Compare with various +4 to reflex saves vs. some specific effect.

I don't see this as a problem really, but if there is a desire to keep them in line with prior boots, perhaps make them +1 to saves while in the desert, or +1 to reflex and +1 to fort or something.
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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #7

Some possible tweaks:

Swap the armor images for "Armor of Aset", and "Armor or Ra" as Ra is the sun god and the "Armor of Aset" looks like it has a glowing sun in the chest.

Maybe rotate the "Scepter of Seth" 180deg, or horizontally fip-it then change the angle. The big part on the bottom looks awkward and kind of like a guitar

The drop shadow on the "Tomb Guard Shield" is opposite to the light source. For this one it might be easier to just horizontally flip the shield, thus fixing the dropshadow, while also putting the starburst on the light side of the shield.
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2024 Uncommon Token Images < FINAL IMAGES ! 1 year 2 weeks ago #8

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These all look really nice, too!

I was a bit surprised by the Arrow of Ra doing +3 damage, but if I read it right, that's going to be the new standard going forward, that projectiles give a bigger damage boost? Probably a long overdue change, as the old +1 Arrows packed a bigger punch (proportionally) when our foes only had 40-50 HP, and projectile damage hasn't kept up with inflation.

The only other comment I have is that the "Tomb Guard Shield" confused me at first, with the word "Tomb" on one line, and "Guard Shield" on the next. I wonder if "Shield of Tomb Guard" would scan better. Not a big deal, though, as the +2AC etc. text is the important part, and that scans just fine.

Otherwise things look goof to me (other than the Heavy Axe missing a dot, as Aegoce also mentioned)
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